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Start the Presses: Too many accidents are happening

October 02, 2010|By Dan Evans
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Gabriel has done a tremendous job with this profile of a former Flintridge Prep standout trying to make his way in the NFL. The story gives an interesting and nuanced portrait of Ramses Barden, an up-and-coming wide receiver for the New York Giants, accomplished despite the fact Gabriel had to write the story 3,000 miles away from his subject.

News Story (tie): "Anger, frustration still flaring over Station Fire" (Aug. 26, Megan O'Neil) and "Glendale YWCA official terminated; another resigns" (Aug. 5, Melanie Hicken)

Megan has taken what could have been a dull anniversary story and turned it into an excellent read. She did this through the use of details, noting a charred pair of motorcycles its owner refused to throw away. The balance of the article is thorough, well-balanced and interesting.

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Melanie, for her part, took on a very difficult story. Several of the subjects in the story wanted to recant or change their comments after speaking to her. She stood her ground, however, and the story was much stronger because of it.

Photo: "Small brush fire in Griffith Park" (Aug. 10, Tim Berger)

This is simply a wonderful spot news shot, and one that solidified Tim's reputation for bringing back great art regardless of the assignment. The slight diagonals from the water drop, and of the subject in the foreground draw viewers in and keep them there.

Dan Evans is the editor. Reach him at dan.evans@latimes.com.

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